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To be good
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January 09, 2010, 06:19:05 PM »
I am deaf, you are all foreigners
A contradiction is a curse, a heavy farce, daily despair
I Put my ear to the mouth of my spouse
And the vibrations go through me like empty air
I am only alive when I suffer and shout
In me there are protests without end
And I don't know what hurts
If its my broken heart or my intestines
Does this seem familiar? How could you know?
Each song of tomorrow's birds enters your house
And you welcome it like a friend
As the sweet sounds seduce you
To be compassionate and tolerant
To be good
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January 26, 2010, 12:32:05 PM »
nice write, esp like line 10, v sweet.
Bill.
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January 26, 2010, 08:29:21 PM »
Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you particularly liked the tenth line. I almost re-wrote that line!
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April 19, 2010, 05:39:59 PM »
Yes I have to agree that this is a good write. You must know someone who is deaf. To come up with the associations, you must have known a deaf person. It have a personal feel to it. That is why I say that. I like how deep and personal you get with the poem.
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